短文改错 Today after school I paid a visit for my friend who inj

短文改错 Today after school I paid a visit for my friend who injured her during training.Icame home late at night .It was too cold that there were few people in the stree.Being alone,I felt a bit scaring,but I couldn't walk fast dut to my heavy schoolbag.Sudden I saw something jump out from behind a parked car ahead.I couldn't help cry.Because I am short-sighted,I didn't see clearly where it was.I begin to run and couldn't wait to get home.As the thing got more closer and closer,I found that it was actually dog.I breathed a sigh of relief and hurried home.
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Today after school I paid a visit (for改成to) my friend who injured (her改成herself) during training. I came home late at night. It was (too改成so) cold that there were few people in the stree. Being alone, I felt a bit (scaring改成scared), but I couldn't walk fast due to my heavy schoolbag. (Sudden改成Suddenly) I saw something jump out from behind a parked car ahead. I couldn't help (cry改成crying). Because I (am改成was) short-sighted, I didn't see clearly (where改成what) it was. I (begin改成began) to run and couldn't wait to get home. As the thing got (去掉more) closer and closer, I found that it was actually (加入a) dog. I breathed a sigh of relief and hurried home.

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smile444444 举报

能不能告诉我为什么这样改!谢谢!

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  1. 固定短语pay a visit to sb 拜访某人

  2. who指My friend,和her为同一人,所以用反身代词herself

  3. 固定句型so...that...

  4. scaring 令人害怕的;scared 感到害怕的

  5. 做状语用副词suddenly,sudden是形容词

  6. 固定短语can't help doing sth 禁不住做某事

  7. 整篇都用过去时,所以用was不用am

  8. what it was 它是什么;where it was 它在哪里

  9. 过去时began

  10. closer本身就是比较级,其前无须再加more

  11. dog为可数名词,泛指时前面不能烧掉a

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如果满意,还请采纳,你知道的,谢谢!

smile444444 举报

我很满意,我英语成绩撇,你的谅解我能够理解

smile444444 举报

再次感谢!

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你不知道怎样采纳我的答案吗?这才是真正的感谢啊,晕......

smile444444 举报

怎么采纳? 我真不知道--

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点击我答案下面的 “选为满意回答” 按钮,即可。

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我这个是在客户端上面看不到那个按钮 电脑上的时候我弄吧

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真的很晕...... 该骂的度娘

smile444444 举报

额… 我睡觉了 拜拜

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好吧,希望你不要忘了
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