想请老师批改05年的考研大作文.
想请老师批改05年的考研大作文.
As we can see from the picture.there are four children kicking the ball which is their old father couching as a foot ball.the oldest son are kicking away his father with an exerting face.And then,they all stand in front of their doors like a goalkeeper,none of them would willing to lead their father to back their “doors”.
The phenomenon described in this photo should wake us up.Nowadays,many young people-to big city for money- are used to be away from their parents who needed the children be with them,.And some of them are reluctant to take care of their aged parents who is regarded as a burden by their children.As a result,the old people can not get any care from their children when they be weak and helpless.
Supporting parents is a indispensable virtue of China.The refusal to take care the responsibility of supporting parents is immoral and illegal.In order report ,we should pay more care to them.
As we can see from the picture.there are four children kicking the ball which is their old father couching as a foot ball.the oldest son are kicking away his father with an exerting face.And then,they all stand in front of their doors like a goalkeeper,none of them would willing to lead their father to back their “doors”.
The phenomenon described in this photo should wake us up.Nowadays,many young people-to big city for money- are used to be away from their parents who needed the children be with them,.And some of them are reluctant to take care of their aged parents who is regarded as a burden by their children.As a result,the old people can not get any care from their children when they be weak and helpless.
Supporting parents is a indispensable virtue of China.The refusal to take care the responsibility of supporting parents is immoral and illegal.In order report ,we should pay more care to them.
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As we can see from the picture.There are four children kicking the ball which is their old father couching as a football.The oldest son is kicking away his father with an exerting face.And then, they all stand in front of their doors like a goalkeeper. None of them would be prepared to lead their father to back their “doors”.
The phenomenon described in this photo should wake us up.Nowadays, many young people-to big city for money- are utilized to be be away from their parents who needed the children to be with them,.And some of them are unwilling to take care of their aged parents who are regarded as a burden by their children. As a result, the older people cannot get any care from their children when they be weak and helpless.
Supporting parents is an indispensable virtue of China. The refusal to deal with the responsibility of supporting parents is immoral and illegal.In order report, we should pay more care to them.
这是修改好的版本,请查阅.还望采纳!
The phenomenon described in this photo should wake us up.Nowadays, many young people-to big city for money- are utilized to be be away from their parents who needed the children to be with them,.And some of them are unwilling to take care of their aged parents who are regarded as a burden by their children. As a result, the older people cannot get any care from their children when they be weak and helpless.
Supporting parents is an indispensable virtue of China. The refusal to deal with the responsibility of supporting parents is immoral and illegal.In order report, we should pay more care to them.
这是修改好的版本,请查阅.还望采纳!
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