请专业认识来看一下这段话中有哪些语法错误,指出并帮忙改正,谢谢!

请专业认识来看一下这段话中有哪些语法错误,指出并帮忙改正,谢谢!
Today is Black Friday, believe it or not, it's a bad day. I didn't believe it before, so i hung out, then i found i
forgot to take my purse with me when i was in cinema so i missed the movie. Never go out again on Black Friday.
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zhengjing52o 幼苗

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It is a Black Friday today, believe it or not, it's a bad day indeed even if I didn't believe it before, so I hung out, then I found I forgot to take my purse with me when I was in cinema, so I missed the movie. Never go out again on Black Fridays.
写作功底还不错,注意下句子间的逻辑关系就行。

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