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Cultures-National and Internation
What a vivid picture it is showing in sight! In the picture, an American girl, wearing traditional Chinese costumes, is smiling heartedly. There is a pair of long earring hanging on her ears and a beautiful necklace around her neck. It shows that Cultures-National is loved by international friends.
Undoubtedly, the photo just aims at reminding us that our country’s cultural has been accepted by the people around the world and has become a part of international culture. As far as I am concerned, there are at least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. For one thing, it is the inherent charming of our great national culture that deeply attracts a great number of people from different countries all over the world. For another, this phenomenon does reflect a fact that our country is becoming much stronger than ever before in almost every fields such as education, technology, economy and so on. Just imagining how it could be possible for the people from other countries to accept a poor country’s culture.
In my apprehension, cultural exchange should be still maintained and encouraged. And it needs every citizen to make a contribution to this activity.