英语短文改错Without the development of science and technology

英语短文改错Without the development of science and technology
Without the development of science and technology,our world will change a lot of every way in the future.We will live in the cyberspace.If we like,we didn’t need to go out to buy thing,go to the library to read,see a doctor in the hospital,and so on.To out joy,it is very easily to visit the other stars,such as the moon and Mars.And we will own a tidy and green world because the energy what we use all from the sun.what’s more,any illness can be cured and many people can live long with a healthier body.All those will be true,I think,through our efforts.
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小小倔 幼苗

共回答了25个问题采纳率:92% 举报

看文章的意思是有了科学技术的进步 第一个without 改为 with
第二个 every way 改为 ways
第三个 文章一直在陈述未来 didn't改为 don't
第四个 thing改为things
第五个 easily 副词不做表语 改为 easy
第六个 Mars 前面也加上the
第七个 use 后面加上 are
第八个 long改为longer 与healthier 对应
第九个 efforts改为effort 印象中没有复数形式
to out joy 应该是你拼写错误了吧
改错题一般九个错误 一个对的
我尽力了,改错题就是多练,熟记语法.

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枚儿 举报

是十个,非常感谢你,再帮我找一个好吗?急啊,谢谢哈

举报 小小倔

第二行 把 the cyberspace 改为 a cyberspace 希望能帮到你呀!语感上来讲,这点应该改一下。 前面没有提到 cyberspace 直接开始说 应该是a 引导

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(With) the development of science and technology, our world will change a lot in the future. We will live in the cyberspace. If we like, we (don't) need to go out to buy thing, go to the library to r...

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嫣水寒 幼苗

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第二行thing改为things 用复数 第三行the other应去掉the ,the other指两者之间的另一个,常和one搭配,宇宙中不可能只有两个星球 应去掉the 第四行的own 直接用have不是更好吗own指私有。后边because引导的原因状语从句,既然是句子就得有谓语动词,what应改为that作定语,原句改为because the energy that we use a...

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