谁来帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?

谁来帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?
A new year is coming again .I am very happy because I will be one year elder ,14 years old .An unknown world is waiting for me ,there will be successes and failures ,however ,i really look forward to the adventure of the new year.
吹水玲 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

zj_kaiwei 幼苗

共回答了22个问题采纳率:86.4% 举报

one year older不是elder
i really look forward改成i'm really looking forward
adventures
of the new year中of改成in
确实读着感觉很怪.你肯定是先用中文想,然后再翻成英文的.

1年前

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ioeiou 幼苗

共回答了48个问题 举报

A new year is coming again .I am very happy because I will be one year elder ,14 years old .An unknown world is waiting for me ,there will be successes and failures ,however ,I really look forward to the adventures of the new year.

1年前

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梦雨碎心楼 幼苗

共回答了5个问题 举报

elder改为older
there前加and
此外,感觉表达上不太符合英文的表达习惯,像是对汉语的逐词翻译

1年前

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