英语作文,网落在日常生活中的用处和你的看法

你好,
如今,网络已经成为日常生活中必不可少的工具,它给我们带来了很大的便利,但也有很多不利.内容1.电脑不能代替教师上课；2.不在网上学习可以增强合作学习的能力；
3.长时间看电脑的危害.
Nowadays the Internet has become part of our daily life. Some students even think that computers can give us lessons instead of teachers .I don't agree with this opinion. In my opinion, we can't have lessons without teachers because teachers can help us whenever we meet with difficulties or questions. What's more, it's very important to work together as a class.
There are some other disadvantages besides these.Firstly, it will be harmful to our eyes if we look at a computer for a long time. Secondly, it takes us so much time , money and energy. If we spent too long time playing computer games and got addicted to it , it would be very difficult to get out of it. What's worse, we may have access to the scenes of violence and sex
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