玩转大富翁
幼苗
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As is seen in the pictures,Xian Ming,a Middle School student,is considered a good student. He works very hard and is always ready to help others at school。When he finds his teachers tired from work, he will offer to pound his / her back. If his classmates have difficulty with their studies, he will try his best to help them out.
However, at home,he depends on his parents almost in everything. Even when he finis
hes washing his feet, he will ask his mother to dry them.
Xiao Ming is an example of many young people. At present, most families have only one kid. At home parents tend to spoil their children while at school teachers are always strict with them. Therefore, many teenagers gradually form double behaviors.
I think such double behaviors have bad effect on both kids themselves and society in the long run, because in this situation kids are easily to become dishonest。
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