求英语高手,帮我修改此篇文章!Success is not because of luck ,but hard work
求英语高手,帮我修改此篇文章!
Success is not because of luck ,but hard work
When you succeed,others will say congratulations to you.They often say that you are in luck and the God bless you.Then I want to tell you that the success is not because of luck,but hard work.Then I will give you an example to explain why I say.
The company hire two news employees.One is graduated from a famous university,and the other one is graduated from a normal university.When he who came from the normal university came to the company to work at the first time,many people said he was in luck.But he just laugh it off.
Later,in an internal selection of competent competition,he was final,and the one who was graduated from a famous university was final too.And he made the final victory.In the promotion of the reception,a lot of people said that his luck was very good,because of that his leader was the judge.
But,I want to say that his success is not by luck,but by hard work.In fact,no one knows that how much effort he made,how many nights he was without sleep and how much date he analysed.
As the saying goes,the opportunity is often to those who are prepared,and the good luck often likes to the hard-working people.The hard working can get more knowledge,so when the opportunity comes,you can catch it and make success.
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