求写一篇英语作文 我最喜欢的季节-冬季

I love winter
我爱冬天
I love winer ,not only I can get birthday gift but also play games with friends ueing snow.
我爱冬天,不仅仅是因为冬天我可以收到生日礼物,还因为,冬天可以和朋友们一起打雪仗.
I think it is the most beautiful view in the world that snow flies in the sky.All the things return to be white,to be pure.
我觉得漫天飘雪是最美丽的风景,万事万物都成了白色,满世界都是纯净.
I still remember that when I was 7 yeas old that was my first time saw snow. It was amaizing and I had the first snowman of myself which was made together with father.
我至今仍然记得,那是在我7岁时,第一才看到下雪,也是第一次和爸爸做了一个雪人.
精心修改,望采纳.