我想请英语高手帮我纠正一下语法错误.我知道很多,但是拜托你们了.

我想请英语高手帮我纠正一下语法错误.我知道很多,但是拜托你们了.
Well,here are three main aspects that I will be talking about.Children need to understand their parents,Meet more friends and Extend some more hobbies,initially for the first point,most parents are very hard working,the reason why they doing it is they have a family especially for their children,parents expect their children to receive the best education and enjoy the better life,all of this is based on economy,therefore most parents don’t care wherever they are working at,they just care about how much they can earn for their children or family,so children should understand their parents,don’t be naughty and don’t be positive if your parents are not around you.