我自己写的短文,找错误lt was a sunday afternoon.l did math homework at

我自己写的短文,找错误
lt was a sunday afternoon.l did math homework at home.The math homework it's very diffcult.When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me.He wanted play football with me .l like playing football very much.But now,l had to do my math homework.l said to Tom," l'm so sorry,l had to do my homework.Maybe antother time".Finally,Tome walked home in slience
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yangyouqiong 幼苗

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The math homework it's very diffcult:改为:the math homework was very diffcult.
When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me.改为:when I was doing math homework,my best friend Tom talked to me.OR
when I was doing math home work,my best friend Tom asked me to play football with him..
l like playing football very much 改为:I liked playing football very much.即使喜欢是一般现在是,但在过去里,你还是要用过去是,或者你可说:I would like to go very much.
But now:去掉now就可以了,你不需要它.
l had to do my homework.改为I have to do my homework,因为你前面用了一般现在时态,前后要一致,还有这个句子是个直接引语,所以时态是不用变得,

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大明后裔 幼苗

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The math homework it's very diffcult-->the math homework is very diffcult.
When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me--> while i was doing my homework,my best friend Tom was talking...

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chenxinren1985 幼苗

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原文:lt was a sunday afternoon. l did math homework at home. The math homework it's very diffcult. When l did math homework. My best friend Tom talked to me. He wanted play football with me . l like pla...

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斌斌在线 幼苗

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The math homework it's very diffcult-->the math homework is very diffcult.
When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me--> while i was doing my homework,my best friend Tom was talking to me.
l like playing football very much-->liked
l'm so sorry, l had to do my homework-->had改成have

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潇洒一笑 幼苗

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lt was a sunday afternoon. l did math homework at home. The math homework is very diffcult. When l was doing math homework, my best friend Tom talked to me. He wanted play football with me . l like pl...

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