请帮我看看英语有没有语法之类的错误

请帮我看看英语有没有语法之类的错误
I am writing this financial support letter for my daughter XXX's study in Japan.My daughter,XXX,who learn hard since she was young,and she decided to go to Japan for a further study after graduation in 2010.Our family fully supported her idea and we also hope she can make some contribution to the friendship between China and Japan.So I’m glad to pay for all the cost when she studies in Japan and be her financial guarantor.The entire tuition fee and maintenance fee will remit to her individual account through the China Bank timely.
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3601gxp 幼苗

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My daughter,XXX,who learn hard since she was young
应该为who has been studying hard(从过去延续到现在并且持续的动作have been doing)
Our family fully supported her(support原形)
cost when she studies in Japan
应该是when she studying in Japan

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suweiye1981 幼苗

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Our family fully ( support) her idea and we also ( hope ) she can make some contribution to the friendship between China and Japan. 前后时态不一致.make some contributions.
My daughter, XXX, who ...

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