请问大家这句话的语法错误在哪里?

请问大家这句话的语法错误在哪里?
With such perfect basic facilities,teachers can present knowledge to their students more potently and comprehensively and the students would accept such knowledge with great pleasure.Just imagine this,if you stay in a bright and clear classroom,watching the computer's screen to see what your teacher is talking about.Wouldn't that be interesting?