短文改错One day i went shopping at a gift shop.i was greatly int
短文改错One day i went shopping at a gift shop.i was greatly interesting and i lost me in beauti...
短文改错One day i went shopping at a gift shop.i was greatly interesting and i lost me in beautieul goods.before i paid for what i had bought,i left my handbag on the counter.there was about two thousand dollar in it.
短文改错One day i went shopping at a gift shop.i was greatly interesting and i lost me in beautieul goods.before i paid for what i had bought,i left my handbag on the counter.there was about two thousand dollar in it.
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有6处需要改动：
1.at a gift shop—in a gift shop
2.greatly intresting—greatly intrested
3.lost me—lost myself
4.before—Before
5.there was—There were
6.two thousand dollor—two thousand dollors
当然啦,其中两个首字母未大写可能是因为打字方便.建议一下,如果可以,就把最后一句作为定语放在handbag后面,这样子意思会更紧凑一些.
1.at a gift shop—in a gift shop
2.greatly intresting—greatly intrested
3.lost me—lost myself
4.before—Before
5.there was—There were
6.two thousand dollor—two thousand dollors
当然啦,其中两个首字母未大写可能是因为打字方便.建议一下,如果可以,就把最后一句作为定语放在handbag后面,这样子意思会更紧凑一些.
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