改错 第一篇9个错 第二篇7个错,
改错 第一篇9个错 第二篇7个错,
第一篇1In ten years.i think i was a reporter.2i will live in beijing ,because i go te beijing.3last year,and fall in love with it 4.i think it is really an beautiful city.5as a reporter,i think i meet many interesting people .6i think i will live in a apartment with my parent .7during the week .i look smart.8and probably will weat a suit .in the weekend.9i will can dress more casually.
第二篇dear uncle wang.
my good friend is the same age like me.he is really nice .and he always lends my things.yesterday ,he borrowed my english book and doesn^t return it so i couldn^t do my homework.idon^t want to have a fighr with him so he is my good friend.idon^t know how to do.could you give me some advice?
yours,
李明
第一篇1In ten years.i think i was a reporter.2i will live in beijing ,because i go te beijing.3last year,and fall in love with it 4.i think it is really an beautiful city.5as a reporter,i think i meet many interesting people .6i think i will live in a apartment with my parent .7during the week .i look smart.8and probably will weat a suit .in the weekend.9i will can dress more casually.
第二篇dear uncle wang.
my good friend is the same age like me.he is really nice .and he always lends my things.yesterday ,he borrowed my english book and doesn^t return it so i couldn^t do my homework.idon^t want to have a fighr with him so he is my good friend.idon^t know how to do.could you give me some advice?
yours,
李明
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第一篇：1.in ten years表示将来时,所以应该是i think i will be a reporter
2.因果关系反了.I will go to Beijing because i live in beijing.
3.last year应该是过去式,所以是 fell in love with it
4.beautiful 的首字母b不是元音字母,所以应该是i think it is really a beautiful city.
5.as a reporter, i think i have met many interesting people .
6.apartment首字母是元音字母,所以是i think i will live in an apartment with my parent
7. during the week 和i look smart.有什么关系?
8 on the weekend
9.will can不能同时出现, 删can
第二篇
like 改成 as
and he always lends my things. and改成 but. 根据上下文
lends 改成 borrows,lends是借出
doesn^t return it 改成 didn't return it
fighr 应该是 fight 吧? fight 改成 quarrel
so he is my good friend 改成because he is my good friend
2.因果关系反了.I will go to Beijing because i live in beijing.
3.last year应该是过去式,所以是 fell in love with it
4.beautiful 的首字母b不是元音字母,所以应该是i think it is really a beautiful city.
5.as a reporter, i think i have met many interesting people .
6.apartment首字母是元音字母,所以是i think i will live in an apartment with my parent
7. during the week 和i look smart.有什么关系?
8 on the weekend
9.will can不能同时出现, 删can
第二篇
like 改成 as
and he always lends my things. and改成 but. 根据上下文
lends 改成 borrows,lends是借出
doesn^t return it 改成 didn't return it
fighr 应该是 fight 吧? fight 改成 quarrel
so he is my good friend 改成because he is my good friend
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