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My favourite memory of childhood
How time flies,I am already 18 years old,but the memory of my childhood is still like an unforgettable sweet dream.
I always dream about returning to the past.Once when I was five years old,my mom bought a bag of eggs which was pink and oval.It was appeal to me so much.How a pretty fowl come out of an egg,could I make it come true?I imagined.It was hold in my hand tightly.At the following days,During the school days,it stayed it would be good and waited for me in my bag.After the approach of night the pretty egg together with me slept in the night.The egg and we was like peas and carrots.All though everything has two coins,I only felt that I had built up friendship with a warm agg.
Unique aim was that the little chicken would be standing in front of me truly ..How pure real simple aim it was.It was unfortunate that when I was holding my small friend heart and soul the egg It was split.It was really messed up.I would never forgot that moment and depressed at the bottom of my heart.
What a original thought it was.This is my favourite memory of children.
I always think that Childhood is like a beautiful starry sky,
Childhood funs are like stars that light up the dark sky.