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My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited , hoping to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speakers as much as I can to improve my English . Secondly, there are many attractions that interest me a lot , among which is Big Ben. Besides, football , which is popular in England , is my favorite sport . I have been dreaming of watching a live football match there and the dream will come true soon . My friend Alice lives in London. I will probably meet her . I am sure I will have a good time .
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