这个句子是否有语法错误、Hunter is catching up with a fawn.when I see the
这个句子是否有语法错误、
Hunter is catching up with a fawn.
when I see the frist sunshine the river is going through the forest.
And the light is shotting on the fish.
At this moment,l hear the sound of gun,suddenly and violently.
I put up any head the cloud look like the blood .
suddenly,I can hear a bear coming.
thank you for coming into my room.
Thank you for coming into my life.
so,I will love everday.