这个句子是否有语法错误、Hunter is catching up with a fawn.when I see the

这个句子是否有语法错误、
Hunter is catching up with a fawn.
when I see the frist sunshine the river is going through the forest.
And the light is shotting on the fish.
At this moment,l hear the sound of gun,suddenly and violently.
I put up any head the cloud look like the blood .
suddenly,I can hear a bear coming.
thank you for coming into my room.
Thank you for coming into my life.
so,I will love everday.
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kikiheyuling 幼苗

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原:I can also exprience the way of how foreigners living.
改:I can also exprience the way how foreigners live.
:)

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TheKingOf宣武 幼苗

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没那么夸张吧

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冰箱里的叶子 幼苗

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还是有个别错误的,改后应该是这样的:
Hunter is catching up with a fawn.
When I see the first sunshine going through the forest.
And the light is shooting on the fish.
At this moment,l hear the sound of ...

1年前

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斯人阿坤 幼苗

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没有语法错误 写的蛮好,是从哪本书抄下来的吧

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