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Published in Harlem ,the owner and editor of the messenger(这个单词是斜体)were two young journalists,Chandler Owen and Philip Randoiph ,who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.(整个句子是划线部分)
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Published in Harlem,The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists,Philip Randolph,who would later make his reputation as a labor leader,and Chandler Owen.

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为什么是这样啊?您的理由是?

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这个句子一看,前面published,分词作状语,后面的the owner and the editor明显不能被published,只能是messenger才能被published,所以把the messenger提前做主语。其次,the owner and editor 感觉是指一个人吧,(就如我们说he is a singer and dancer 他既是歌手也是舞者)但是后面用的是were。还有就是后面定语从句不清楚到底是修饰哪个人。
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