英语句子的问题.Though the passage,i see There are more important th

我觉得这样好点Through the passage,i understand there are more important things in life than money.不需要大写,可以合并 there are more important things in life than money 是understand的宾语.
In our daily life,have a lot of example about,因改成 In our daily life,there are a lot of examples about
about 后不用加标点 直接加例子的内容（仅限短语） 这里如果例子是句子 就要把about去掉换成句号.后用句子一一列举
It seems to me,TO be a winner ,you need to give all you have and try your best.
It seems to me,to be a winner ,you need to give all you have and try your best.
把to 大写换成小写 我觉得这句没问题的

1 there 不能大写，只有句子开头才大写
2 句子缺少主语 应该是In our daily life，we have a lot of examples about 后面好像没完啊。用什么符号要看后面想说什么，一般用逗号
3 to小写，另外不知道你第一句想表达什么意思Though the passage，i see.... 通过这篇文章，我明白了... There are...

Though the passage, i realise there are more important things in life than money. 不用大写，个人认为用realise 比较好。
第二句我不是很确定是什么意思
to be a winner，不用大写，In our daily life，have a lot of example about 在我们日常...