高一英语作文请打分 30分制 不胜感激

高一英语作文请打分 30分制 不胜感激
As far as i am concerned,For teenagers,who wanna adopt a healthy-growing-up,It’s essential for us to set up a classification of optimistic mind of life-span. Only by this way can we be promoted to struggle for sophisticated ambition.
Additional,There is nothing for us teenagers,who are just in school more important than work.not only can study enrich our knowledge,but also our horizons will be greatly broadened.
The last but not the lest,exercises can make our life more enjoyable but also add color to our dull routine of every day life.it can make our body stronger than ever before as well
If you obey the above three statements,you will gain a healthy growing-up directly!
northfink 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

悠悠意粉 幼苗

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这个是高一学生写出来的作文吗?我有点怀疑,不过写的确实很好,倒装,从句,还有高级词汇用的都不错,可以给个将近满分的分数了(其实给个满分也可以)

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zjll 幼苗

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分数不会有多高,属于中等那种。你可以选择灵活点运用短语那些。

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zz南北极 幼苗

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15,这篇文用了很多词汇和短语,是亮点,但用法都很牵强,感觉基础知识还不够牢固,有很多语法和拼写错误。在运用辞藻的同时还要注意最基本的语句通顺:)

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