ADOLL 作文

I have a doll .It’s a girl .She has long gold hair .She has a small mouth and nose .Her mouth is red and her eyes are very big .Her ears are big .They ring a pair of eardrop up .Her brow is very long and thin .She is very thin .Oh! She is very beautiful!请多多指点！有没有错别字或者病句。拜托！！Thank you very much !