帮忙看一句话吧,英语的一个句子Inconclusion,as far as I am concerned that ef

In conclusion,as far as I am concerned that effective learning method is that combine reading with positive program and useful websites,which can comprehensively foster children's language ability and motivate their imagination.
>前半句不通,感觉像是词汇生搬硬套,堆上去的.
>一些语法错误.
>句子结构较差,并且有些过于长了.长度实际上没关系,但是把短语过多地连接起来会造成意味不明.要长,得先保证把短语之间的联系挑明了.
>请问为何要加入"As far as I am concerned"?意思明白,请问用处是?请参考上条.请适当考虑是否要把它加入这段话里.
In conclusion,(as far as I am concerned,) the effective learning method would be to combine reading with positive program and useful websites.It can comprehensively foster children's language ability and motivate their imagination.

as far as I am concerned 这个本身就有问题。你两个动词是什么意思？难道这里是被动语态？要么你就去掉am，要么你就把concerned改成ing

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In conclusion,as far as I am concerned,effective learning method is to combine reading with...

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as far as i am concerned后面加逗号，去掉that