短文改错（只有10处错误） I was very exciting.I had won a 200 dollars sh
短文改错（只有10处错误） I was very exciting.I had won a 200 dollars shoppingticket which I coul...
短文改错（只有10处错误）
I was very exciting.I had won a 200 dollars shoppingticket which I could use to buy something from popular toy shop.Mymother took me there to choose what I want.I was having a hard time choose because there were so much things.
My mother knew about
⊥168[1/3]that I could not decide what to buy.She suggests something.Finally,I decidede to buy a bicycle.They cost 160 dollars.x0d I though⊥168[2/3]f the money in some bicycle equipmeni,and I remembered my younger brother at home.So I used the rest of the money to buy a board g⊥168[3/3]with my brothers when I got home.
短文改错（只有10处错误）
I was very exciting.I had won a 200 dollars shoppingticket which I could use to buy something from popular toy shop.Mymother took me there to choose what I want.I was having a hard time choose because there were so much things.
My mother knew about
⊥168[1/3]that I could not decide what to buy.She suggests something.Finally,I decidede to buy a bicycle.They cost 160 dollars.x0d I though⊥168[2/3]f the money in some bicycle equipmeni,and I remembered my younger brother at home.So I used the rest of the money to buy a board g⊥168[3/3]with my brothers when I got home.
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