This is a picture of my room . Can you see my bed? It's

This is a picture of my room . Can you see my bed? It's here . It's fine . I like very much . These are my books. Look! What's that？ It's a hat . What color is it? Do you know ? It's yellow. It's on the bed. My backpack is under the bed. How nice my room is!这段话对吗？