I went out for a walk yesterday with my mother

I went out for a walk yesterday with my mother
I met a foreigner on the streed ,then he asked me how to get to hospital
I told he to go the way alone when he found a big building he should turn
right and go forward Then he can find the hospital in the road
he said :“ Thanks "
I was happy and said :"you are welcome "
村野郎中 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

wxdshandian 幼苗

共回答了20个问题采纳率:95% 举报

I told he to go:he改成him
steed:是street吧?街道,大街的意思
how to get to hospital:hospital前面加the

in the road :这种说法不太明确.可以说at the end of the road/或by the road 在
路的尽头或路边,看你想怎么表达了.
I told he to go the way alone :alone你是想表达哪种意思呢?就现在这个句子看来alone这个词用在这里不太合适,你的原意是什么?告诉我我能帮你想想~/>

1年前

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佳业欣 幼苗

共回答了77个问题 举报

I went out for a walk yesterday with my mother
I met a foreigner on the street ,and then he asked me how to get to the hospital
I told him to go along the way and turn right when he found a big building. Then he can find the hospital.
he said :“ Thanks "
I was happy and said :"you are welcome !"

1年前

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lili393 幼苗

共回答了192个问题 举报

1on the streed 改成 in the street 注意拼写错误, street后面打句号
2去掉then, he 注意改成He
3 hospital前面加个the
4 I told he 改成I told him
5go the way alone改成 go along the road 加个逗号,
6when he found...

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