找这篇文章的语病、单词拼写不正确和语句不通顺.

找这篇文章的语病、单词拼写不正确和语句不通顺.
My Classmates And I
There are 50 classmates in our class.We are friendly.Tom often helps with my Chinese.Jack often plays basketball with me.My favorite subject is English,so I help them with their English.I do homework by myself.We often help each other.
卖家27 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

狼行暗夜 幼苗

共回答了11个问题采纳率:90.9% 举报

两个地方有待斟酌
1 We are friendly. 换成 we are friends. 更符合习惯点.
2 Tom often helps with my Chinese.这个地方的help要接宾语的.
改成 Tom often helps me with my Chinese

1年前

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yimian2005 幼苗

共回答了38个问题 举报

1. friendly-friends
2. helps 后加me
改后:
My classmates and I
There are fifty classmates in my class. We are friends to each other. My cloest friends are Tom and Jack. We often help each ...

1年前

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kkkk 幼苗

共回答了11个问题 举报

1:And _"and"
其余还行,但用了太多"help",do sb's favor也行!

1年前

1

shinehu 幼苗

共回答了2个问题 举报

Tom often helps with my Chinese 改成Tom often helps me with my Chinese

1年前

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