英语老师来帮忙点评下，具体点哈假如你叫李华，为了培养同学们的英语学习兴趣，提高英语水平，你和你校的几位英语爱好者在互联网

英语老师来帮忙点评下，具体点哈
假如你叫李华，为了培养同学们的英语学习兴趣，提高英语水平，你和你校的几位英语爱好者在互联网上建立了一个叫easyenglish的
网站。请用英语在校报上写一篇文章向你校全体同学介绍这个网站。要点如下：
1.目的：培养学习兴趣，使学英语变得更轻松
2.内容：①丰富的英语材料：英语习题、外国文化、英语小故事等；②网络英语聊天；③展示英语习作、交流学习体会。
注意：
1.短文必须包括以上要点，可适当添加细节
2.词数：100词左右
我的作文..
Dear fellow students,in order to improving your English level and growing up your interest in English,several school English devoter and set up a English web which was called "easyenglish"on internet."Making English learning easier"is purpose for us to established this web.As you wander on it ,not only will you obtain adequate English material,including English story,foreign culture as well as English work,but also let your friend chat online in English.
In there,we can exchange our studing tip each other and exhibit superb English sentence which making by yourself
Let's go the web !
最重要的是优化下我的句子哈,
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可以有点中文滴解释吗？怎么看着有点拉住狂copy的感觉......