He said it angrily,pointing at the notice on the wall.

要改成先行词是什么的定从呀?都写了啊
1,The man who was pointing at the notice on the wall said angrily.
The man who said angrily pointing at the notice on the wall.
The man pointing at the notice on the wall which made him angry.
2,●修改,你的问题是要picking blackberries 做woman 的定语,而整句话,中可以做动词的只能是pick和see,这两个词如果即要picking blackberries 修饰woman 又要,有伴随,就少谓语了,那样改是不对,
With the woman picking balckberries,the dog was seen only five yards away from her.
with表伴随.

1The man who is pointing at the notice on the wall said it angrily.
2She saw "a large cat" only five yards away from her,picking blackberries.

The man who was pointing at the notice on the wall said it angrily.
She saw "a large cat" only five yards away from her,picking blackberries.
把第一句的“is"改为“was"