请求帮忙英语造句用computer-assisted,interpret ,submit ,stretch,sympto

请求帮忙英语造句
用computer-assisted,interpret ,submit ,stretch,symptom ,feel an
aversion to,communicate造句,顺便看看本人的句子有无语法错误.
Most people interpret the computer-assisted life as a new style of living.Receiving assignments,searching information and submitting exercises on Internet are more efficient and convenient.But I think working on Internet at a stretch may cause you the symptom of feeling an aversion to direct communication and that is harmful to you.
忧郁小轩轩 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

酒吧舞妖 幼苗

共回答了21个问题采纳率:85.7% 举报

楼主有才.只建议把最后的那个2个
1) that is harmful to you,改成
...communication,which is harmful to you.甚至which is harmful 就可以了.
2) 不要用But起句,换成 However,I think.

1年前

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ev0bmiam 幼苗

共回答了10个问题 举报

不好意思,多句嘴
1,第一句最好改成被动的句式;The computer-assisted life is often regarded as a new style of living.
2,i think是一个很主观的句子,英语中不常这么用应该用it is supposed that;
实在是想表达自己的意愿最好用in my point of view

1年前

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