假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、
| 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处写一个漏字符号（  ）, 在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线, 在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. |
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Last Saturday 1 went to the library as usually . At about noon, I was enjoying my readingusual
near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened . when heard
happening shocked
I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were
people
standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I
pushed through the crowd as Itook off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back andto safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.my
I was proud
what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is inneed. of
小题1:as usual正如往常 固定短语
小题2:while 引导的从句中，谓语动词应是延续性动词。
小题3:时态前后应一致。
小题4:happen是不及物动词，不能用被动
小题5:我感到惊讶，应用shocked
小题6:people是一个集体名词，始终表示复数概念。解释为“民族”时，才可以用单复数形式。
小题7:take off 的动作与push 的动作同时发生，不用过去完成时
小题8:这里是并列的动作，没有转折关系。
小题9:本文是以第一人称写的，故用to my great relief.
小题10:be proud of +n. 或名词性从句
near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened . when heard
happening shocked
I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were
people
standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I
pushed through the crowd as Itook off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back andto safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.myI was proud
what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is inneed. of 小题1:as usual正如往常 固定短语
小题2:while 引导的从句中，谓语动词应是延续性动词。
小题3:时态前后应一致。
小题4:happen是不及物动词，不能用被动
小题5:我感到惊讶，应用shocked
小题6:people是一个集体名词，始终表示复数概念。解释为“民族”时，才可以用单复数形式。
小题7:take off 的动作与push 的动作同时发生，不用过去完成时
小题8:这里是并列的动作，没有转折关系。
小题9:本文是以第一人称写的，故用to my great relief.
小题10:be proud of +n. 或名词性从句
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