能帮我找找这篇短文的错误吗,英语水平有限,麻烦修改一下.

能帮我找找这篇短文的错误吗,英语水平有限,麻烦修改一下.
On the first day,the rabbit went fishing,he did not catch a fish up.
On the second day,he still did not catch a fish up.
On the third day,the rabbit still has gained nothing,when he want to go home,fish jump out of the water,The fish is very angry and sad,fish say:" don't use carrots as bait!"
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On the first day, a rabbit went fishing, but he did not catch any fish. On the second day, he still did not catch any fish. On the third day, the rabbit still gained nothing. When he wanted to go home, a fish jumped out of the water. The fish was very angry and sad, saying, "Don't use carrot as bait!"

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