Write an article called “Do you have a cold?”

Write an article called “Do you have a cold?”
Write about what you should and shouldn't do.
Do you have a cold
Everybody sometimes has a cold.When you a cold ,you should rest.You shouldn't go out at night.You should go to bad early for a few nights and you should see a doctor.You shouldn't eat junk food like ice cream.You should drink lots of water.
If you has a healthy lifestyle,you should try do exercise,and you should eat a balance of yin and yang to be healthy.
帮忙改下错哈,明早之前哈
请问下,哪个是正确的,是you should try do exercise,还是you should try to do exercise
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penythere 花朵

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Do you have a cold
Everybody sometimes has a cold.When you a cold ,you should(have a) rest.You shouldn't go out at night.You should go to bad early for a few nights and you should see a doctor.You shouldn't eat junk food like ice cream.You should drink lots of water.
If you has(has 应改为want to have,第二人称用复数) a healthy lifestyle,you should try(to) do(more) exercise(应该加负数,变成exercises),and you should eat a balance(把balance改成balanced) of yin and yang to be healthy.
作文写的还不错,主要注意单复数的应用,就可以了.

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Do you have a cold
Everybody sometimes has a cold.When you have a cold ,you should rest.You shouldn't go out at night.You should go to bed early for a few nights and you should see a doctor.Yo...

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you should try to do exercise

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dfwl6 幼苗

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第二句话应该是When you get a cold .
You should drink a lot of water.(lots of 修饰不可数名词)
If you have a healthy lifestyle.
最后一句话 you should have a balenced diet to be healthy.

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Do you have a cold
Everybody has a cold sometimes.When you get a cold ,you should take a rest.You shouldn't go outside at night.You should go to bed earlier for a few days and you'd better see...

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