文:Now let me tell you something for my holiday.I go to Beiji

文:Now let me tell you something for my holiday.I go to Beijing with Dad and Mom last week.We visited Beihai Park,the Forbidden City,Ruins of Yuanmingyuan and so on.In Beijing zoo I looked some lovely pandas
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城市夜行人 幼苗

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1.tell you something for my holiday中把for改成about
2.I go to 改成I went to,后面都说了,是last week
3.在Ruins of Yuanmingyuan和and so on之间是不是应该有个逗号呀
4.In Beijing Zoo I looked是不是应该改成we looked
5.老外都说giant pandas吧
其他的就想不出来了

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3263487 幼苗

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I go to-----I went to
looked----saw

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zangzangic 幼苗

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for my holiday-about my holiday
go to -- went to
looked -- saw

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诚实美 幼苗

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for my holiday—in my holiday
go to —went to

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dong_da 幼苗

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Now let me tell you something ABOUT my holiday.I WENT to Beijing with Dad and Mom last week.We visited Beihai Park,the Forbidden City,Ruins of Yuanmingyuan and so on.In Beijing Zoo I SAW some lovely pandas

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something about my holiday
I went to
with my parents
I saw

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