我这篇文章有无错误?I am Gina.I hope have many sports collection.There

我这篇文章有无错误?
I am Gina.I hope have many sports collection.There are two basketballs,three volleyballs and six ping-pongballs.But I don"t have any ping-pong bats.I like playing tennis.I also hope have many computergame.Becuse they"er interesting.That sounds good,right?
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有错误
I hope have就是一个典型的病句.
只能说I hope (that) I could have..这个你们还没有学,不要用hope了,从句意上看,用hope非常不合适,你都已经有了为什么还“希望”?
直接就说like嘛,I like sports collection

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紫语馨亭 幼苗

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computer games
becuse改为because
they're

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风吹云淡星移 幼苗

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有错误 应该是-l hope l have mang spqrts collection

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