英语作文自己写的不知道有没有错误,

英语作文自己写的不知道有没有错误,
It is important for us to keep healthy .We should prevent illness and also should keep healthy by enough exercise and reasonable food.
I am always exercise at least an hour every day.After school I go home on foot.At free timeI often do gymnastics.I do not have fast food.I always eat vegetable bacause it is good for our healthy.
I will give you some advice First stop eating fast food.Second do more exercise.Third remember to have breakfast every day.
Heisha_521 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

天黑拉 幼苗

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also should 最好去掉
I am always 的am去掉
vegetable加s
our healthy改成our health

1年前

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mynametony 幼苗

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It is important for us to keep in good health . I will give you some advice about how to be healthy. First, you have to stop eating fast food.Second,you should do more exercise.Third, remember to have...

1年前

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写照 幼苗

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eat vegetable要加s,蔬菜可数。

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鳄度秋风 幼苗

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第一段第二句,illness变成复数illnesses;“also should”不删掉会没有谓语吧?再把后面的by改成through;reasonable food改成balanced diet。
第二段,am是多余的,删掉!(every day分开来用表达“每天都”,你把它和everyday区分得很好。)第二段最后一单词,用health!
应该还有可以修改的地方。加油孩纸。我高...

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