英文改错题,超急Dear Abby,I want to ask you for my advice .when I le

Dear Abby,I want to ask you for my（改为your） advice .when I leave the（去掉the） school ,I want to be an engineer .I have made tools at home and have written articles for magazine（改为magazines） .my father says（改said） that engineering is（加not） a suitable subject for a girl to study it（去掉it） .he wants me to study geography ,however ,I am not interested in this subject at all .I tried to read books on it ,so（改but） I was so bored .what should I do I respect my fathers（改father's） judgment and experience ,but I don't think he understood (改为understands) me.Best wishes
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Dear Abby,
I would like to ask for your advice. After I graduate from school, I want to be an engineer. I have made tools at home and written articles for magazines (a magazine). However, my fa...

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Dear Abby, I need your advice. I want to be an engineer when I leave school. I make tools at home and have written technical articles for magazines. My father says that engineering is ...

Dear Abby,
I want to ask you for advice. I want to be an engineer after I graduate. I have made tools at home and written articles for magazine . My father said that though engineering was a ...