英语改错Dear editor,Lastweek,two students of our school get stom

英语改错
Dear editor,
Lastweek,two students of our school get stomach ill because they eat fry food outof school.In a way,in order to make money,some sellers ignore people’shealth and safe.
Interms of this situation,students should eat foods on campus.Although foodsoutside are better than it that our school make,experts advice that we shouldeat foods on campus.
Toavoid things like that occur,I think we should eat in larger restaurant.Besides,we should eat foods as far as possible.After all,school must guarantee ourhealth.On the other hands,we should follow the food diet.It is beneficial toour health.
Sincerely
Li Hua
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