一篇初中水平的英语作文.Is A family teacher necessary.More and more midd

一篇初中水平的英语作文.
Is A family teacher necessary.
More and more middle school students are going to having family teacher .Some people think that it is necessary.But they are also some people don't agree.
In my opinion,I prefer the second viewpoint.First of all,students need some rest at the weekend .Than some family teachers are in the purpose of making money.Therefore,family teacher is not necessary .We can study well if we hard working.
如果还有错的地方告诉我,已经改了某些地方,但本人英语水平不好,错的地方也找不出来.
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johnchenlin 幼苗

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1going to having
to do
2 they are also some people don't agree
there are some people doing..
3 第二段稀奇古怪的,人家挣钱和你不需要没逻辑关系.而且就两个观点,first of all?all 用于三者以上. 不需要连接词,一个and 就行
建议 ,不要刻意模仿模板.

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wo是ah 幼苗

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题目is应去掉! are going to having 运用be going to do 所以having改成have

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kaonia521 幼苗

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把family teacher 改为 home tutor 好些

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夏日百荷_xx 幼苗

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are going to having 是不对的,be going to表将要,后跟动词原形
think that it is ,不应该加it
But they are also some people don't agree.应改为But some people don't agree.
第二段的开头改成In my opinions
need some rest,...

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肖烟迷漫 幼苗

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楼上说的不全 是把if we had working 改为if we work hard

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ajinka 幼苗

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work hard

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流浪狗00 幼苗

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1going to having family teacher
改成 going to have family teachers
2.But they are ......那句改成 but there are also some people who don't agree with it
3.than 改 second(then是然后的意思,不是than,但...

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