一篇初中英语作文 写的很烂.请告诉我那错了,怎麽该,以及怎麽提高

一篇初中英语作文 写的很烂.请告诉我那错了,怎麽该,以及怎麽提高
I‘m very like my high school life,because I konw a lot of friends and learn a lot ,in school I canplay with my classmate it'sreally interesting.my favorite like subject is P.E.and math because it can exercise my body and exercise my thought although it is so difficult .in future I will work harder than ago and try my best power .
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novensky 幼苗

共回答了15个问题采纳率：93.3% 举报

首先,你不能只写一段,起码分三段写吧,我不知道你们初中生的作文要求,如果字数要求很低的话,开头和结尾可以只用一句总结性的话语就可以了.其次,你的内容也得有层次,只有分段才能让这种层次明显的体现出来.最后你的英文表达太中式了,不地道.
第一句就有问题,应该是I like my high school very much.就像我说的,你可以把这句放在第一段作为一个总起句,然后说：the reasons are as follows（原因如下）.下一段就可以写你和你的同学,然后就是你最喜欢的课程,老师等.第三段总结一下In the future I will work much harder than before and try my best .

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十段到 幼苗

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I‘m very like my high school life，because I can make many friends and play with them .Meanwhile,I can learn a lot of knowledge. my favorite subject is P.E. and math,
even though it's so difficul...

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sunyi10 幼苗

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I like my high school life very much becausse I learnt a lot and made a lot of friends here. I can play with my classmates at school. It's really interesting. My favorite subjects are P.E.and math bec...

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huoleilei 幼苗

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I like my high school life very much, because I learn a lot of friends .At school I canplay with my classmates it's really interesting.My favorite subjects are P.Eand math, because they are ve...

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清风PPPP 幼苗

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like是动词，不能直接接在be动词后面，like也可以做介词，是好像的意思，I‘m very like my high school life这句意思就变成了我很像我的高中生活。交朋友应用make friends or make acquaintance with sb 在学校应用at school. my favorite like subject is P.E. and math becau...

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