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第1)小题,There are advantage for students to work while中,系动词are和主语advantage的单复数一致性出现了问题,但此时还不能贸然判断究竟是哪一个出现了问题.通过阅读下文,得出至少有两个层面的“好处”,因此把advantage改为advantages；
　　第2)小题,studying at school.One of them was that中,时态错误,应将was改为is；
　　第3)小题,they can earn money.For the most part,中,没有错误,for the most part为习惯表达,表示“最主要的原因是”,且语法无误；
　　第4)students working to earn money for their own中,working是非谓语形式,导致该句没有谓语,是一个典型的不完整句,因此要将working改为work,还原其谓语功能.
　　第5)小题,use.Earning their own money allow them中,主语为动名词形式的earning,与谓语allow的一致性出现问题,应改为allows；
　　第6)小题,to spend on anything as if they please.中,从句引导词错误,导致含义混乱,应将as if改为as；
　　第7)小题,They would have to ask their parents for中,如上文中的解释,改为should not；
　　第8)小题,money or for permission to do things by中,介词使用有误,这主要还是一个语法问题.将by改为with；
　　第9)小题,the money.Some students may also to save中,情态动词和不定时的语法问题,应该将to去掉；
　　第10)小题,up for our college or future use.中,这里的代词our与全文的叙述角度发生冲突.经判断,将其改为their.

There are advantages for students to work while studying at school. One of them is that they can earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allows them to spend on anything as if they pleas...

There are advantageS 1 for students to work while STILL 2 studying at school.One of them IS 3 that THEY 4 can earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allowS 5 then to spend IT 6 on an...

1.advantages 2.one of them was ---is 3.allow then --them 4.piease --please 5.as if 去掉if6. for permission 去掉for 7.also to去掉to 8. have ask -have to ask 9.for our college 改our为their

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there are advantages for students to work while studying at school. One of them is that they can earn money for their own. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything if they are pleased. ...

There are advantages for students to work while studying at school.One of them is that they can earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allows them to spend on anything as they please. T...