一道英语改错题,再说下意思one day,after finishing my classes,i head towae

一道英语改错题,再说下意思
one day,after finishing my classes,i head towaeds (1)
the bus station to go to home.when i reachedthe station,(2)
i saw an old lady carried a heavy bag.i kept watching her (3)
for a while and noticed she was struggling to walk.but i (4)
decided to go up to help her.she looked at me,shocking (5)
at first,but then she gave me a bag and smiled.i walked (6)
with her until she reached my destination ande i handed her (7)
the bag.she was still smiling and kept thanking me and (8)
wishing me the best of luck.i felt happily after she (9)
left.i brought her happiness and i became happy,either.(10)
ivnana149 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

cuikuinan 春芽

共回答了10个问题采纳率:80% 举报

1.head → headed
整段用一般过去时
2.去掉第2个to
home是副词,前面无须副词to
3.carried → carrying
an old lady与carry是主动关系
4.but → so
从文意来看,前后为因果关系,而非转折关系
5.shocking → shocked
she是“感到震惊的”,所以用shocked
6.a → the
第二次提到bag,当然为特指
7.my → her
文意为“先到她家”
8.√
9.happily → happy
用形容词和系动词felt构成系表结构
10.either → too
肯定句中的“也”用too
基本意思:我放学后去车站等车回家,站上看见一老奶奶提着重物.我帮她返家,她感激不尽,我亦高兴!

1年前

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shenfeng26 幼苗

共回答了34个问题 举报

1 head - headed
2 to 去掉
3 carried - carrying
4 but - so
5 shocking- shocked
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7
8
9 happily- happy
10 either- too
恕我678实在是找不出有什么语法错误
其他的都肯定

1年前

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