tom和jack是以前的同学,他们在回家的路上相遇.jack生病了,tom叫他去看病,但是jack已经去看过了,医生叫他

Tom and Jack were schoolmates before,One day they met on the way home.Jack was ill,and then Tom told him to go to see a doctor,but Jack had done it ,and took advice for the doctor that take pills and rest on time .个人觉得这是过去时态吧,过去,现在间隔的不太好翻译的感觉,这个作文语法应该还没到那个难度,有不足之处,望自行改正斟酌.

这是五年级的吧！

Tom and Jack were former schoolmates, they met on the way home. Jack is ill, Tom tells him to go see a doctor, but Jack had ever seen, and doctors told him to rest and remember to take your pills