英语短文改错,I went to the shopping to buy a jacket .It is a very
英语短文改错,
I went to the shopping to buy a jacket .It is a very famous one that there are a variety of clothes .I looked all around and finally find a captivating jacket .When I was asked the price ,the vendor said,"Seventy dollars ."He added that if I paid by cash ,he would give me a discount__ten percent for the fixed price.I thought it was too expensive and started to leave .As iI was left ,he grabbed me and said ,"okay,Forty -five dollars." Delighting ,I bought the jacket .However ,when I got home and tried my new jacket ,I realized that anything was wrong with it.
It had a pocket that wouldn,t open.I was speechless and looked ai it in amazement.
I went to the shopping to buy a jacket .It is a very famous one that there are a variety of clothes .I looked all around and finally find a captivating jacket .When I was asked the price ,the vendor said,"Seventy dollars ."He added that if I paid by cash ,he would give me a discount__ten percent for the fixed price.I thought it was too expensive and started to leave .As iI was left ,he grabbed me and said ,"okay,Forty -five dollars." Delighting ,I bought the jacket .However ,when I got home and tried my new jacket ,I realized that anything was wrong with it.
It had a pocket that wouldn,t open.I was speechless and looked ai it in amazement.
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I went shopping to buy a jacket .It is a very famous brand and there are a variety of clothes .I looked around and finally found a captivating jacket .When I asked the price ,the vendor said,"Seventy dollars ."He added that if I paid by cash ,he would give me a discount__ten percent for the fixed price.I thought it was too expensive and started to leave .As I was leaving,he grabbed me and said ,"okay,Forty -five dollars." Delightedly ,I bought the jacket .However ,when I got home and tried my new jacket on,I realized that something was wrong with it.
It had a pocket that wouldn't be opened.I was speechless and looked ai it in amazement.
It had a pocket that wouldn't be opened.I was speechless and looked ai it in amazement.
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