修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,

修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,
TO:Bailey
Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.
Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in love with you,but I dare not told you that I like you,because I was very worried about that you would refuse me,so,I thought a large number of ways to close you.Time goes by,I found that i love you more and more deep,but I never express my feeling to you,until we graduate from class 10,but I believe that you know I like you.Today,I want to tell you that you are my oasis in my soul.
I love you so much,I want to marry you in the future if I can give you a fabby life,so,I must fight for my dream.Although I will meet many problems on the way of my dream,but I will give over all problems!
You are my faith,I believe in you forever.
Please be brave!
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Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
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