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1. My English teacher is very good that she teache us,I want to ba a person as her
正确说法:My English teacher teaches very well. I want to be a person just like her.
前半的重点是“教得很好”,你那句是“她的人很好”
后半句as的用法不对。
2. I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher.
正确说法:If I become an English teacher, I will do my best to teach and help my students in improving their English learning.
"an English",不是 a English. “try to myself best”是明显语法错误。让学生学得好不等同分数高。
3. I can be good friendly students,play with them after class.
正确说法:I will treat my students as my friends and join them after class.
原句明显语法错误,“课后与学生一起玩耍”,是假设学生在课余必定去玩耍,意思不合情理。
4. I should hard study now,because of I want to become a good teacher
正确说法:I should study hard now, because I want to become a good teacher.
形容词应在动词之后,because 之后不用 of
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为什么because 之后不用 of
“try to myself best”是明显语法错误。
后半句as的用法不对。
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because of 之后该是 something,而不是 I
to 之后该是什么,请你去翻翻语法书
like 和 as 用法的分别,一般语法书都有
不必在此详述!