英语翻译 在星期六下午,我和八年级一位的朋友爬到山顶上,享受于蓝天,很美,宽阔.“看!是一只鹰在空中飞翔!”在场激动起来,它要往我们这方向飞过来了!随着阵阵的微风,透过一丝丝的凉意,我仍然想永远在这里. On Saturday afternoon ,a grade eight friend of mine with me climbed to the top of mountain.To enjoy the bule sky,that was great and wide."Have a look!a eagle has flyed to our here!Along with the gentle breeze
with me最好放到句尾,不然不通顺 To表示不定式,表达目的,假如按照你写的,中文就应该是:为了享受蓝天 eagle是怎么发音的?怎么能用a呢? an eagle is flying toward us.顺便说一句,那个就算你在陈述一件过去发生的事情,语言还是根据当时发生的情况决定的时态.而且你这句话里,to our here?完全就不通顺. 但是,如果你勤加练习,还是可以的,下次多练练,发上来,我帮你改,会有很大进步的.加油
On Saturday afternoon, a grade-eight friend and I climbed to the top of a mountain to enjoy the bule sky which was great and wide."Look! An eagle is flying towards us!“ We yelled with excitment. Feeling the gentle breeze, though a bit cold, I still wanted to stay there forever.