daisy512
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【As is clearly shown by the cartoon】(加上这个可能好点),it goes without saying that the cartoon aims at revealing a common (and seriou)(去掉括号里面) pheonmenon in our society : with the rapid development of internet,
(We choose it as the only tool to communicate with others)
唯一的交流工具,不符合现实,应该改为 the essential tool 或者the popular tool
可以改为:The inrernet has become essencial to our life,We choose it as the popular tool to communicate with others
and don't want to do the same thing (in the reality) .
(in the reality) 应该为 in real life
Therefore ,We live much closer than anytime before
yet the distance
(inside of )改为( between) us (become) further( long )改为 (longer)than anytime before too.
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