英语语法问题,帮我看下这两句话这样写有什么问题

英语语法问题,帮我看下这两句话这样写有什么问题
I’m writing to express my apology for the date that I can't go
这里感觉有点不是很舒服
还有
Althought I'm willing to attend the date of my closet friend ,the present need to buy ,in tomorrow.So I only to regretfully say sorry to you and please to tell john and rose the absence of me.
这里the present need to buy 我想倒装,
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I’m writing to express my apology for I can't go the date.我觉得这样比较好吧~
Althought I'm willing to attend the date of my closet friend ,the present need to buy ,in tomorrow.这句我不知道你想表达什么意思.
虽然我很乐意参加我最亲密的朋友的约会,但是我要在明天买礼物.
是这样么?
后面一句也好奇怪,and后面没了主语.

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Althought I'm willing to attend the date of my closet friend ,the present need to buy ,in tomorrow 因为这句话前面提到过要帮祖母买生日礼物,所以不能参加约会 I’m writing to express my apology for I can't go the date.这里for 后面不需要加什么连词吗,直接从句?

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我觉得不需要倒装吧,可以不写这么复杂。要是我,我就写:Althought I'm willing to attend the date of my closet friend ,I need to buy the present tomorrow.后句接上。 至于那个for是接原因状语从句,连接词不起主语的作用,可以去掉,当然不去也可以。 OK,这是我的看法哦,我也不是老师教授什么的,所以谁有看到不对的要跟我说说哦~嘻嘻~
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